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I remember the snow.

Every year I would have gone to that same corner
To try and build a hiding place.



I remember the snow.

The cold would make me smile.
The cold was refreshing.



I remember the snow.

I've never had a snowball fight.
Why throw it away?
That cold magic that gives a warm feeling inside-



I remember the snow.

It made its surroundings so quiet
That problems couldn't have been heard.
Nor exist.



I remember the snow.
And I waited for it every year.



I remember the snow

Starting to melt.
I couldn't hide in it anymore.



I remember the snow

Fading away.
The noise returned, the smile disappeared.



I remember the snow.

I waited for it every year
But it never returned.
I have decided not to tell what's behind this one so that the interpretation wouldn't be limited.
I'd like to hear your ideas of it :)
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imdangel Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
the flow of the poem is beautiful :)
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kagirinai-yume Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :)
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mehmetdincerkoksal Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012
very nice
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shadowleigh Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I LOVE the flow of this poem.. to be honest what I thought of this is the story I've been working on.. about this 23 year old who was taken from her home... er, world actually... good luck in the contest!
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kagirinai-yume Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!!
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firye Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
featured in my journal [link]
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:iconkagirinai-yume:
kagirinai-yume Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow Thank you!! :la:
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firye Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
you're welcome! i really liked it!
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sunflower901 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2012
Normally I dislike free verse but this made me smile.
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LitTechGirl Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012
I love this poem! Great job!
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