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I remember the snow.

Every year I would have gone to that same corner
To try and build a hiding place.



I remember the snow.

The cold would make me smile.
The cold was refreshing.



I remember the snow.

I've never had a snowball fight.
Why throw it away?
That cold magic that gives a warm feeling inside-



I remember the snow.

It made its surroundings so quiet
That problems couldn't have been heard.
Nor exist.



I remember the snow.
And I waited for it every year.



I remember the snow

Starting to melt.
I couldn't hide in it anymore.



I remember the snow

Fading away.
The noise returned, the smile disappeared.



I remember the snow.

I waited for it every year
But it never returned.
I have decided not to tell what's behind this one so that the interpretation wouldn't be limited.
I'd like to hear your ideas of it :)
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imdangel Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
the flow of the poem is beautiful :)
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kagirinai-yume Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :)
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mehmetdincerkoksal Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012
very nice
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shadowleigh Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I LOVE the flow of this poem.. to be honest what I thought of this is the story I've been working on.. about this 23 year old who was taken from her home... er, world actually... good luck in the contest!
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kagirinai-yume Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!!
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firye Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
featured in my journal [link]
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:iconkagirinai-yume:
kagirinai-yume Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow Thank you!! :la:
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firye Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
you're welcome! i really liked it!
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sunflower901 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2012
Normally I dislike free verse but this made me smile.
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LitTechGirl Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012
I love this poem! Great job!
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:iconkagirinai-yume:
kagirinai-yume Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :heart:
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VistaMusa Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Student Digital Artist
It sounds that you (I mean the lyrical I) miss a time maybe at your infance that makes you feel like nothing else makes you. Either you moved somewhere far, where the winters are not cold enough to snow, or you have never had a winter with such a spirit like that of those times (which I think more likely).
Really nice poem! I enjoyed it in a special day of my life. Thank you dear.
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kagirinai-yume Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! You got it exactly right. :)
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VistaMusa Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Student Digital Artist
oh, I'm glad to know! lol
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CometGreen Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ah!
But remember my dear, winter comes just twice a year!
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:iconkagirinai-yume:
kagirinai-yume Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
And where I live snow comes once in a lifetime :D
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CometGreen Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Might I suggest going further towards the poles during winter break?
More likely to see snow.
I love snow.
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Hoshigetsu Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Hobbyist
Very lovely :)
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kagirinai-yume Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks!
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Dancing-Koi Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I don't have an interpretation but I think it is beautiful. Very nice work.
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kagirinai-yume Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :)
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The-Satsu-Monster Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Student General Artist
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