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You were alone from the start,
But you didn't care back then.

You were special.

So special that no one could understand you.
But that was special too.
No one could reach you in your bubble.

Then the others came.
They were more special.
You pulled away.
While being surrounded you felt so alone.

Until you were really alone.
And no one could understand you.
Not even you.

You tried to change.
But the bubble was strong.
You kicked and screamed, but no one noticed.
That was what the bubble was for.

Then came the time when they pushed you away.
They couldn't have known you are different.
Are you different?

you drifted away,
They won't remember.
They won't remember what they never knew.

Did you know?
Who are you?
Why is it painful?
What is painful?
Why are you crying?
I know It's not perfect.
I know some of you might not even call it poetry.
I just had to let my feelings out somehow,so I'm sorry if it would bother any of you.

*EDIT*

I didn't expect so many faves and comments, Thank you all so much ! :heart:
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I-Lost-My-Way Jul 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
And all I can think is one of my favorite quotes from Alice In Wonderland: "Yes, but WHO are you?"
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:iconiminlokisarmy:
disney quotes are the best
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:iconadventurerocker:
i can relate to this so deeply , it's too beautiful for me
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kagirinai-yume Jul 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much! :heart:
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:icontheapplescientist:
Concept reminds me of "The Wall" (Pink Floyd album) .
Strong. I like it. :)
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kagirinai-yume Jun 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you, and thank you for the fave! :heart:
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:icontheapplescientist:
You're very welcome!:)
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:icontuminka:
I know this is about the poem..but I want to ask about the picture above..is this a drawing or picture?? ...Its just beautiful!!!:heart:
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kagirinai-yume Jun 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It's a picture and it's from google :P
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Lacia-Marie8 Jun 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You just wrote out my inner thoughts in a manner so beautiful that angels themselves would cry. This is some of the best poetry of all time.
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