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You were alone from the start,
But you didn't care back then.

You were special.

So special that no one could understand you.
But that was special too.
No one could reach you in your bubble.

Then the others came.
They were more special.
You pulled away.
While being surrounded you felt so alone.

Until you were really alone.
And no one could understand you.
Not even you.

You tried to change.
But the bubble was strong.
You kicked and screamed, but no one noticed.
That was what the bubble was for.

Then came the time when they pushed you away.
They couldn't have known you are different.
Are you different?

you drifted away,
They won't remember.
They won't remember what they never knew.

Did you know?
Who are you?
Why is it painful?
What is painful?
Why are you crying?
I know It's not perfect.
I know some of you might not even call it poetry.
I just had to let my feelings out somehow,so I'm sorry if it would bother any of you.

*EDIT*

I didn't expect so many faves and comments, Thank you all so much ! :heart:
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I-Lost-My-Way Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
And all I can think is one of my favorite quotes from Alice In Wonderland: "Yes, but WHO are you?"
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iminlokisarmy Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014
disney quotes are the best
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adventurerocker Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2012
i can relate to this so deeply , it's too beautiful for me
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:iconkagirinai-yume:
kagirinai-yume Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much! :heart:
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TheAppleScientist Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012
Concept reminds me of "The Wall" (Pink Floyd album) .
Strong. I like it. :)
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:iconkagirinai-yume:
kagirinai-yume Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you, and thank you for the fave! :heart:
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:icontheapplescientist:
TheAppleScientist Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2012
You're very welcome!:)
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tuminka Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012
I know this is about the poem..but I want to ask about the picture above..is this a drawing or picture?? ...Its just beautiful!!!:heart:
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:iconkagirinai-yume:
kagirinai-yume Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It's a picture and it's from google :P
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Lacia-Marie8 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You just wrote out my inner thoughts in a manner so beautiful that angels themselves would cry. This is some of the best poetry of all time.
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:iconkagirinai-yume:
kagirinai-yume Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :heart:
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:iconlacia-marie8:
Lacia-Marie8 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
No trouble at all! Thank YOU.
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:iconnekodrayuchimaki:
NekoDrayUchimaki Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2012
so beautiful.
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:iconkagirinai-yume:
kagirinai-yume Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you.:)
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:iconnekodrayuchimaki:
NekoDrayUchimaki Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012
you are welcome!!
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buddydog726 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for writing down the exact story of my life.
<3 Great work. =)
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:iconkagirinai-yume:
kagirinai-yume Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :P
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:icondanchez:
danchez Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012  Professional Photographer
very nice, thank you for sharing!
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:iconkagirinai-yume:
kagirinai-yume Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Glad you like it! :)
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ServantsRequiem Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I think it's wonderful. It really vibes with some of my work, some things that I feel have occurred in my life. Thank you! good stuff.
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:iconkagirinai-yume:
kagirinai-yume Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :)
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ServantsRequiem Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
you're very welcome.
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Party-hats-are-cool Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
One thing to say... AWESOME!
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:iconkagirinai-yume:
kagirinai-yume Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much!
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:iconparty-hats-are-cool:
Party-hats-are-cool Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome
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KurosakiAnn Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012
It already is perfect! :D Wonderful work!
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:iconkagirinai-yume:
kagirinai-yume Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :heart:
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:iconkurosakiann:
KurosakiAnn Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012
You're welcome!
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:iconerene:
erene Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012
Wonderful words and a wonderful capture!
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:iconkagirinai-yume:
kagirinai-yume Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you:)
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:iconerene:
erene Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012
You are welcome :)
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lennykagamine19 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012
Oh this is amazing!!! It relates to my life so much.....
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:iconkagirinai-yume:
kagirinai-yume Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much!
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lennykagamine19 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012
Oh ur welcome!!!! I really love and it has astonishing descriptives which make anything better. Great work and word choice!!!! <3
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:iconkagirinai-yume:
kagirinai-yume Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you again :hug:
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:iconlennykagamine19:
lennykagamine19 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012
U r so totally welcome! Thanks for sharing
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:iconjurnae:
JuRnAe Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012
Its great, you must always let your feels out. I wish you to be happier though :)
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:iconkagirinai-yume:
kagirinai-yume Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha,Thanks!
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:iconjurnae:
JuRnAe Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012
Your welcome :)
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RocknRolla91 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
this EXACTLY how feel now and most days. This is perfect the way is!
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:iconkagirinai-yume:
kagirinai-yume Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :)
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RocknRolla91 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
You are welcome, you made me cry but a good cry cause there is someone out there that knows EXACTLY how I am feeling. It is a beautiful written piece
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kagirinai-yume Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:hug:
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RocknRolla91 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
:D thanks
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AsylumAssassin Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Cool.
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MonoOnYoutube Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It IS perfect. ;0; :iconmanlytearsplz:
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:iconkagirinai-yume:
kagirinai-yume Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks ;A; :heart:
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MonoOnYoutube Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:D NP
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xxjoe1309xx Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Student General Artist
Uh..... my 'friend' had me sing it in front of a huge crowd.....they enjoyed it.... (sorry for using it without permission... my friend saw it and wanted to sing it)
Its truely amazing
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kagirinai-yume Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, I'm flattered!
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